Great sound, vocals come in nice and clear. You have a nice singing voice and you lirics are interesting.
One problem I have with your album is your use of the lucky charms celreal box. Your cover is just an invitiation for a lawsuit as you didn't even bother removing or altering the General Mills logo not to mention the fact that you are using their trademarked (vey different from copyright)box art.
At the very least, I'd photoshop (or Gimp) the General Mills logo out. Probably not enough to avoid the courts but it's better than nothing, it's one less thing for them to sue you for. :)
If you don't care about being sued, I'd consider the impact on Jamendo, they could (in my NON-professional opinion) be sued as well for hosting your album.